Star_Shot

[kill3r3at3r]

Designation: (Star_Shot)

Player: (kill3r3at3r)

Gender: (Mech)

Height: (29Ft)

Weight: (varies)

Physical Description: (Star_Shot doesnt have one physical 'body' with his ability to turn into anything even an organic life form, no one believes his bot form is his true form. That being said Star_Shot has been known to take on a Prime look to fool Decepticons into thinking he is a higher ranking than truely is.)

Alt. Mode(s): Anything (be weary he can turn inot other bots doesnt do this often though)

Faction: (Autobot)

Function: (Biotech)

Weapons: (weapons tend to be bio-based usage such as fire and earth weapons.)

Fighting Style: (Last fight was on cybertron hasnt faught since)

Strengths: (Ability to change into anything)

Weaknesses: (Weaknesses is only known to his fallen Prime leader)

Personality: (Feels unneeded so stays out of the way even when needed.)

History: (Star_Shot was a great Auto bot scientist that worked for one of the most powerful primes ever. One day he went out with his Prime to search for a cure to a fake disease that was believed to kill Autobots. The search ended up with his leader being killed and Star_Shot being slamed into a pod and shot off to earth before even the fallen arived. He constructed a base and entered a hibernation state of being waiting to be found by Auto bots.)

Quote: ('Ive made a arm and a leg dont ask for a head')

Other: (To this day has not woken from his slumber)

Read more: bookrpg.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=zzz&action=display&thread=3#ixzz1ZgvZKqCC

[Psychowing]

Hm...there are a couple things that should be worked on.

First of all, the "shape-changing" thing seems to be a little...far-fetched. It sounds like the character is using Pretender tech., but at a much higher level that sounds...impossible. I know the Pretenders from ROTF were capable of changing their appearance, even to organic things (Alice, for example), but you state "anything," which causes a matter issue. I understand there can be some molecular compression and expansion, but only to a certain point. I don't see the possibility of disguising as a mouse, then an elephant, for example. While I think this type of disguise is useful, I believe it should be more specific and having limits, as in your character having the ability to disguise as anything within certain conditions, the main thing being a size range.

I haven't looked too much into Pretenders from G1 and such, but from what I know, those Pretenders are Transformers with outer shells that boost their power and whatnot. Feel free to wiki them if you want. I like using Thunderwing from the comic Stormbringer as an example, but that's on the extremes for Pretenders.

However, changing the alt. mode to whatever he wishes is alright as long as he gets a scan of whatever he transforms into AND it suits his size. Frenzy from the first TF movie is a good example of this. He technically could transform into anything that suited his size (full body=stereo system, just the head=cell phone).

I'm curious in the weapons. You state they're bio-based, which could be really cool and useful, but "fire and earth weapons" doesn't explain what he has well. Does he have a chemical gun? Those things are useful... Does he have a flame-thrower? Please be more specific on what he has.

The Fighting Style isn't to explain when the character last fought, but HOW he fights. Does he fight up-front in battle? Does he stay back and assist? Does he not fight at all?

The history makes me a little iffy. I wish the live-action Transformers had more information on the line of Primes before Optimus and Sentinel. I'll permit it...but I'm taking it with a grain of salt. Perhaps later you can add more to his history and make it more complete.

I hope this is useful to you and will help develop your character more. Also, feel free to check out the profiles already made for examples. I don't mean to boost my ego, but I believe Talon's profile is a good example among the others: www.bookrpg.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=zzz&action=display&thread=12 In fact, looking at all the character profiles would help you understand the characters your character will interact with. Though, remember that player knowledge is different from character knowledge. And the more information your character has, the more you can play off of. I know I'm certainly someone who doesn't like "surprises" that weren't listed on the character's profile. Not listing weaknesses is fine though.

Your Star Shot sounds like he'll be a very interesting and cool character once he's been tweaked a little. :3 I'm already considering ideas of finding him (most likely accidental).